_ Oh my gosh, the detail in Lily's freckles is astonishing! Also the way their hair flows, especially Snapes is beautiful. I love the way is gently falls across his shoulders and Lily's hand and caresses his face. This piece is a wonderful balance of complex detail and simplicity. All the detail center around their faces and draw our attention to the kiss. I'm really glad that Lily's hair is flat and simple, because otherwise the bright color would normally draw attention away from the main focus of this piece. You handles this beautifully, I love it!
...I have such a secret soft spot for these two. (And kiss pictures.) :3 I really like how clean and sort of pop-art-esque this is, and the little bits of detail that make it interesting, like the blue beads. I especially love Lily's freckles and Severus's hair.
Wonderful work! The poses turned out amazing. I love how you added the broken bead string, a very interesing detail. This plus the spots make thework look less...hm... not to say 'neat'. They add some freedom, less strictness.