Snape looks a bit queer to be honest and Lily, while heavenly beautiful, looks a little unsure of herself and a little reluctant. Maybe thoughts of James Potter are crossing her mind? Awesome picture though. I'm not a fan of Lily/Snape but I'm a huge fan of Lily and can't find enough of her. You drew her like a goddess in this picture and for that I love it. A definite fave!